Response to Ji Hae Choi’s Essay

I think your take on this assignment was really unique.  I love how the intro brings you into your perspective and really sets the tone for the rest of the paper.  I can really see where you are coming from in the rest of the paper because of the beginning dialog.  Your paper was also very relatable.  You spoke of a passion that you have had and how your memories of all the experiences during cheerleading really bring you back in time.  I know that I also have many of these types of memories that bring me back to some of the happiest and influential times in my life.  It is so interesting how the simplest things like the first line of a song can trigger so many different memories and emotions.  Triggers like a song that is still played in the present can be a great connecter to time and experiences from the past.  Your paper was really a fresh interpretation of how time has influenced your life and you used an element that is so true for most people that I did not even think of.