Final Post (Consolidated)

Stasis

–  Antonio, a Venetian merchant, is experiencing an apparently unexplainable depression, while his closest friend Bassanio has been harboring a secret love. Meanwhile, in Belmont,  the beautiful, rich, and intelligent heiress Portia is bound by her father's will not to marry a suitor of her own choosing. All the suitors that have come, however, to attempt her dead father's trial have been quite undesirable.

Implications of Proposed Stasis

– The stasis I have proposed has a great deal to do with the twin concepts of love and marriage. This suggests that these will be some of the primary motivating factors for the characters mentioned in the stasis (Shylock, especially, is excluded from this €˜love and marriage' motivation). It has been theorized that Antonio's motivation is an intense love for Bassanio, Bassanio (obviously) is motivated by his love for Portia, Lorenzo acts out of an infatuation with Jessica, and finally there is Gratiano and Nerissa. All of these pairs, in some way or another, have their actions informed by their love and/or romantic feelings for one another.

Intrusion

– The intrusion, in my opinion, would be one of two things: Bassanio's confession of his love for Portia (to Antonio) or his request for a loan from Antonio. Both of these disrupt the stasis in a way, but I think Bassanio's request for a loan is more significant since it directly leads to the introduction of Shylock into the storyline, and also allows Bassanio to pursue Portia, thus allowing for the two worlds of Belmont and Venice to be intertwined through their characters. Also, obviously, the request for a loan triggers the formation of the loan agreement, which is one of the primary driving forces in the play's action.

Implications of Intrusion

– My proposed intrusion (the loan request) subtly introduces the theme of the importance of money in Venetian (and Belmontian) society: Bassanio cannot woo Portia unless he can dress and travel like a prince. Also, as stated, it introduces Shylock and the role of the Jew as a moneylender in the society of the play. And again, this intrusion indirectly leads to two very separate worlds that would not otherwise unite coming together in the play's storyline. Somewhat more significantly, however, this request introduces the concept of obligation, which is a huge factor throughout the play: Portia is obligated to follow her father's will, Bassanio feels obligated to pay back Antonio somehow, Antonio is obligated to repay Shylock, and Bassanio is obligated to keep Portia's ring safe. This, along with the €˜love and marriage' factors mentioned above in the implications of the stasis,is one of the primary motivating factors, and veen obstacles, for many of the major characters.

Major Conflicts

– Portia's desire vs. her father's will: she wants to marry a man like Bassanio but is obligated to marry only the first man to pass her father's test

– Antonio and Bassanio vs. Shylock: the situation with the loan (terms and Shylock's tenacious adherence to them) and their inability to repay Shylock

– Shylock vs. Christian society's disdain of Jews (as represented by Antonio and Bassanio's attitudes toward him)

– Jessica/Lorenzo vs. Shylock: this conflict directly leads to Jessica's elopement (Shylock would not allow her to see Lorenzo or any of his friends, thus they hatch a plan to elope together)

– Bassanio/Gratiano and their feelings of obligation to the "lawyers" vs. the promises they made to keep Portia's/Nerissa's rings (a very interesting dynamic in the final scenes of the play)

Obstacles by Character (at various points in the play)

– Antonio: Shylock's vehement adherence to the terms of the loan agreement (the primary obstacle), Bassanio's heterosexuality and love for Portia (if Antonio's love for Bassanio is seen as more than platonic), lack of cash (all his money is tied up in his ships abroad)

– Bassanio: lack of money/social status with which to woo Portia, Portia's father's will, Shylock and the loan

"O my Antonio, had I but the means to hold a rival place with [Portia's suitors]€¦" (Bassanio, 1.1.172-173)

– Portia: her father's will (inability to marry Bassanio straightaway), her own intelligence and rationality coupled with Bassanio giving her ring away (she seems unable to completely trust Bassanio and so devises the ring scheme, only forgiving Bassanio after Antonio vouches for him)

"I may neither choose who I would, nor refuse who I dislike, so is the will of a living daughter curbed by the will of a dead fther." (Portia, 1.2.19-21)

"Then you shall be his surety. Give him this [ring] and bid him keep it better than the other." (Portia, 5.1.254-255)

– Shylock: anti-Semitism (widespread, general mistrust of Jews in Christian Venice), legal system of Venice (prevents him from easily enacting revenge on those who have wronged him)

"The devil€¦an evil soul€¦a villain€¦a goodly apple with a rotten heart€¦" (Antonio, referring to Shylock, 1.3.90-93)

– Launcelot Gobbo: the dishonor he will incur by abandoning his master (Shylock)

"The Jew my master who€¦is a kind of devil; and to run away from the Jew I should be ruled by the fiend who€¦is the devil himself." (Launcelot, 2.2.17-20)

– Jessica: her father's feud with Antonio et al. (due to which he will not let her see Lorenzo)

"Hear you me, Jessica, lock up my doors€¦nor thrust your head into the public street to gaze on Christian fools€¦" (Shylock, 2.5.27-32)

Implications of Obstacle and Conflict

– It seems to me that a great many of the obstacles and conflicts mentioned come about because of societal norms and/or nonverbal social contracts. Again, this raises the enduring concept of obligation: characters struggle between fulfilling their obligations to society/friends/family and fulfilling their own individual desires. Also, above I mentioned the concept of a social contract, which would gain great importance in the distant future, thanks to the writings of such philosophers as Hobbes, Locke, and Rousseau. This social contract governing how humans interact with one another provides an interesting parallel to the physical, business contract drawn up by Shylock. Clearly, this play is pointing to a distinct gap between the natural inclinations of the characters and the actions they feel obligated to undertake because of these social contracts. In many cases (Launcelot, Portia, and Jessica especially), this conflict boils down to a common decision: follow orders, or follow your heart.

Things Theatrical (Implications included in each element)

The Courtroom Scene

The court scene is the most theatrical scene in the Merchant of Venice. The implication of this scene is the rule of law. At the beginning, Shylock refuses Bassanio's offer for 6,000 ducats because the limit of the contract has passed, and the Duke of Venice cannot stop Shylock from accomplishing the contract because curbing the law would establish a wrong legal precedent. Nevertheless, Shylock is defeated at the end because of a flaw in his contract, and loses everything accordingly to the law. Through this scene, one can see a strong sense of dogmatism, setting the law as absolute rule that cannot be affected by human emotions. At the same time, the fact that the law eventually makes a judgment that agrees with people's moral judgment, to save Antonio and punish Shylock, emphasizes the idea that the law is equal to justice. This idea that the law is absolute justice is similar to how the judgment of the three caskets were portrayed as absolutely right.

The Three Caskets

The scene where Portia's suitors choose from three caskets to find out if they qualify for marrying Portia is another theatrical thing in the Merchant of Venice. Prior to this scene, Portia mocks all her possible fiancés except for Bassanio in the conversation with Nerissa, and it is clear to the audience that Portia will reject a propose by anybody but Bassanio. And indeed, Bassanio is the one who is chosen as the fiancé of Portia. However, Shakespeare chooses to make Bassanio the fiance through this unique idea of three caskets rather than having Portia simply choose him.

One of the functions of this scene is that it allows the audience to see a clear distinction of the ideologies of the three suitors. The reasons that each suitor gives before he chooses a casket reflect the philosophies and ideologies of the suitors. Through this scene, one can see that there is a clear contrast between the philosophy of Bassanio and the other two suitors.

Secondly, instead of having Portia choose her fiancé and explain to each suitor why or why not he was chosen, Shakespeare makes each suitor choose his own fate and the casket explain why or why not he was chosen. This makes the reasons given for the rejection or the acceptation of the suitor appear to be much more credible than being told through Portia's mouth. It is also important that the phrases in the caskets appear like moral precepts. It gives almost an absolute justice to the judgment by the caskets.

Finally, the casket system allows every person, regardless of class, to be judged equally. The caskets function as dogma that judge people based solely on their philosophies and morals.

This whole scene allows Shakespeare to articulate the problem with the nobles that were criticized by Portia in the prior scene. Throughout the play, the nobles are portrayed as superficial people who care only about their appearance, as opposed to Bassanio, who chooses the lead box because he declares that appearance shows the least of something. And because the caskets judged Bassanio as the right one, the audience is directed towards receiving Bassanio's idea as an absolute truth. What is implied by Bassanio's statement is that the morality of a person is higher than his class or appearance. The fact that the suitors were all judged equally under the casket also emphasizes this idea, as the suitors are judged stripped off of their social status and only by their morals or ideologies.

Shylock's Courtroom Knife

"Bassanio: Why dost thou whet thy knife so earnestly?

Shylock: To cut the forfeiture from that bankrupt there."

I just thought it was pretty theatrical that Shylock has a knife, in a courtroom, and he's sharpening it. Also, the only thing he was question of was why he was sharpening it. There was no shock that he pulled a knife out in the least, they just needed justification not of its presence, but of its sharpening. To much surprise, we see that Shylock is truly seeking revenge and not the money, as repeated throughout the scene. However, this quest for bloody revenge is hindered by the justice system of Venice, to which he must adhere if he is to have any hope of getting what he wants.

Shylock's Aside

"(aside) How like a fawning publican he looks!

I hate him for he is a Christian,

But more for that in low simplicity

He lends out money gratis and brings down

The rate of usance here with us in Venice.

If I can catch him once upon the hip,

I will feed fat the ancient grudge I bear him.

He hates our sacred nation, and he rails,

Even there where merchants most do congregate,

On me, my bargains and my well-won thrift,

Which he calls "interest." Cursèd be my tribe

If I forgive him!"

This, from ACT 1 SCENE 3, is what Shylock said as soon as Antonio enters. This is funny because he slanders Antonio's name, Christian beliefs (by extension, his disdain for Jews), and his lack of interest use disrupting the lending market. While said "to himself," he still said all this out loud in the middle of conversation with Bassanio, which is strange. However, it only led to Bassanio and Antonio requesting Shylock's attention, and not about what he said. This also provides the audience with a bit of dramatic irony: we know that Shylock hates Antonio for his prejudicial behavior, but Antonio and Bassanio do not necessarily know the exact extent. Additionally, asides tend to serve as a tool to make the audience feel a a part of the play, further captivating their attention.

 Shylock's Contract

Among the things theatrical in the Merchant of Venice,  Shylock's contract with Antonio is one of the most memorable scenes. The actual quote reads,

"This kindness will I show.

Go with me not a notary, seal me there

If you reply me not on such a day,

In such a place, such sum or sums as are

Express'd in the condition, let the forfeit

Be nominated for an equal pound

Of you fair flesh, to be cut off and taken

In what part of your body pleaseth me."

This scene has a shocking effect to the audience, as it is an abrupt emergence of violence in the play. Prior to this scene, there is no implication of any form of violence. The emergence of a violent thought in a peaceful time is an implication of how peace is superficial, and violence or grievance is always hidden under. It is also important to note that this line was given by a Jew to a Christian, which implies the profoundness of the cleavage between the two religions.

Comedic Ending

Comedies are known for always ending well even when the buildup may seem hopeless. The Merchant of Venice does just that. The relationships end well and against all odds, Antonio's boats return unscathed, restoring Antonio's fortune. Shylock, however, does not receive the happiest of endings, and depending on how you analyze the script, he may not appear to be the villain he gets labeled from the start. In the courtroom scene, Antonio proposes and the court accepts to:

"So please my lord the duke and all the court,

To quit the fine for one half of his goods

I am content, so he will let me have

The other half in use to render it

Upon his death unto the gentleman

That lately stole his daughter.

Two things provided more: that for this favor

He presently become a Christian;

The other, that he do record a gift

Here in the court, of all he dies possessed,

Unto his son Lorenzo and his daughter."

A man simply seeking acceptance loses his daughter, all he owns, and even his own religion, of which he was so proud, and forced to convert to those he hated most. With not an ounce of dignity, Shylock is in shambles, having no "happy ending" whatsoever.

Others

Other theatrical elements we found included Shylock's monologue directed towards Antonio, beginning with a very heated accusation: "He hath disgraced me, and hindered me half a million, laughed at my losses, mocked at my gains, scorned my nation, thwarted my bargains, cooled my friends, heated mine enemies; and what's his reason? I am a Jew." (3.1.49-61) This is an emotional high point in the play for Shylock, and allows the audience to see more of his motivations for being so vindictive, even if his logic is somewhat twisted. In essence, this monologue plays on the audience's sympathies, perhaps leaving them to question whether or not Shylock truly is the objective villain of the play, or if he is a tragic character to be pitied, having been a product of the cruel society that surrounds him and his kind. Additionally, another theatrical element we noticed was the cross-dressing of Portia and Nerissa, posing as a lawyer and a clerk. This concept of identity confusion is very common in many Shakespearean comedies, Twelfth Night being a prime example. These identity (and often gender) mix-ups add a sense of dramatic irony to the play, and simply put it can be very entertaining and comedic for an audience to be in on a big secret while the characters on-stage are not. Finally, there is Portia and Nerissa's dialogue about the European noblemen. This serves as a thinly veiled, biting satire of the aristocracies of different countries, some of these unfair stereotypes even endure to this day (the German prince is a drunkard, Scots  are violent and hate the English, etc.). This dialogue would have been thoroughly entertaining for the audiences of Shakespeare's day, and would have been one of the high comedic parts of the entire play.

Wrap-Up

– To summarize, according to the elements of the play we noticed through stasis/intrusion, obstacles/conflict, and things theatrical, it would not be inappropriate to claim that the theme of obligation endures throughout the play. It is one of the primary motivating forces for many of the characters, and yet also places obstacles in the way of other characters. The eternal question of loyalty to others versus self-integrity is definitely present here, and is a conflict that many of the characters must deal with. This ties in with an underlying theme of law/justice versus morality, represented by the court scene. Also, quite obviously, the religious tension between Christians and Jews comes to the forefront of this play. Additionally, the question is raised in the course of the story as to whether Shylock is truly the villain of this play. Sure, he is vengeful and nasty, acting mainly out of a desire for revenge. However, it would not be a stretch of the imagination to claim that he is simply an unfortunate product of his environment, as he states in his monologue, and that he has learned his cruelty from the Christians who practiced it upon him. Due to this question, it has been asked whether The Merchant of Venice is truly a comedy. As far as an analysis of theatrical elements goes, we conclude that there are enough comedic elements (identity confusion, neat/happy ending, satire/fooling, etc.) to comfortably classify this play as a comedy. However, this does not mean that the enduring questions mentioned above regarding obligation, morality, religion, and discrimination are discounted or made any less important.

Final-Ball Group 4

Missing Persons (Character)

Bassanio

·       Motivation – Bassanio wishes to woo and wed Portia, he also wants Antontio's well-being because he so devoted to him

·       Obstacles –  At first his lack of funds prevents him from wooing Portia, then he runs into the obstacle of the casket test. As for achieving Antonio's wellbeing, he runs into the obstacles of Antonio's ships apparently being lost at sea, and Shylock holding onto the agreement

·       Action/What? – What the characters does or is willing to do to satisfy the want In order to woo and wed Portia, Bassanio is willing to strain his relationship with Antonio by asking him for money yet again, and travel far. He is also willing to risk failing the casket test and being forced to swear to never pursue her again. In order to protect Antonio, Bassanio is willing to pay many times Shylock's original price.

·       Action/Why? – Why the character chooses these actions? Bassanio chooses to ask Antonio for money because he knows he can trust him in a tight spot (he's done it before), and he has really has a strong desire to try for Portia's hand. He tries to save Antonio's life because he is is closest friend, and he chooses the method of bribing Shylock because he is confident in his relationship with his new wife (it won't strain anything between them).

·       Avowed Action/Why? vs. True Action/Why? – Why does the character SAY he does an action compared to the truth un why he does an action. Bassanio expresses that he would give is own life to protect Antonio. "Good cheer, Antonio! What, man, courage yet!/The Jew shall have my flesh, blood, bones and all,/Ere thou shalt lose for me one drop of blood." (IV, 1, lines 133-155) He seems to be honest in this, traveling far to make it to Antonio's trial and repeatedly offering to sacrifice money and his life for him.

Portia

·       Character(s) Motivation – Portia wishes to wed a good man that she loves, and support him and make him happy without breaking her late father's will. (Should we also include something about wanting to please/support Bassanio? After all she is willing to go to great lengths to aid Antonio because of Bassanio)

·       Obstacles –  Portia struggles with the arrival of many base, arrogant, or simply undesirable suitors. She also struggles with the fact that when Bassanio arrives she cannot simply marry him without breaking her father's will.

·       Action/What? – What the characters does or is willing to do to satisfy the want In order to not break her father's will, she is willing to risk not marrying the one she loves. In order to support Bassanio and therefore Antonio, she is willing to provide great amounts of money, and concoct a scheme involving Nerissa and going under cover.

·       Action/Why? – Why the character chooses these actions? She chooses to aid Antonio and pretend to be a man with Nerissa because she feels it is her duty as Bassanio's wife to support his close friend. "€¦for in companions/That do converse and waste the time together, /Whose souls do bear an equal yoke of love,/There must be needs a like proportion/Of lineaments, of manners and spirit; Which makes me think that this Antonio, Being the bosom lover of my lord, Must needs be like my lord." (III, 4, lines 11- 18) Portia specifically offers support in the form of money because she is quite wealthy. There doesn't seem to be much difference in what she says and what she does, excepting the bit of fun she and Nerissa have with the rings and the expense of their husbands.

Shylock

€¢ Character Motivation – Shylock wishes to get revenge against Christian men, specifically Antonio, who treat him poorly because he is Jewish.
€¢ Obstacles – Shylock has to abide by the law, and so must find a way to avenge himself through legal means
€¢ Action/What? – What the character does or is willing to do to satisfy the want- Shylock creates an agreement with Antonio wherein, should Antonio fail to pay off his debt, Shylock may extract a pound of his flesh.
€¢ Action/Why? – Why the character chooses these actions?
€¢ Avowed Action/Why? vs. True Action/Why? – Why does the character SAY he does an action compared to the truth of why he does an action.- Shylock demands his pound of Antonio's flesh, claiming that he wants it because it is what he is owed, refusing to accept Bassiano's money. In actuality, he demands Antonio's flesh and nothing else, because he is bitter at Antonio for being prejudiced against him.

Antonio

€¢ Character(s) Motivation – Antonio is determined to see Bassanio happy
€¢ Obstacles – He must come to an agreement with Shylock that enables Bassanio to gain enough money to visit Portia and potentially marry her.
€¢ Action/What? – What the characters does or is willing to do to satisfy the want- He agrees to pay for Bassanio's bond and says that should his money not arrive in time for the deal to be met, he will let Shylock take a pound of his flesh in compensation.
€¢ Action/Why? – Why the character chooses these actions?
€¢ Avowed Action/Why? vs. True Action/Why? – Why does the character SAY he does an action compared to the truth of why he does an action. – There is not a real difference between Antonio's true action and avowed action. He says he creates the deal with Shylock to help his friend Bassanio, and that appears to be true.  It is possible, as he is depressed at the beginning of the play, that he is trying to achieve greater happiness vicariously through Bassanio's happiness.  This could be an ulterior motive to his helpfulness in aiding Bassanio's quest for Portia.

Lorenzo

€¢ Character(s) Motivation – Lorenzo wants to marry Jessica and have her convert to Christianity
€¢ Obstacles – Shylock does not want Jessica marrying Lorenzo, or any other Christian
€¢ Action/What? – What the characters does or is willing to do to satisfy the want¬-Lorenzo helps Jessica run away from Shylock's house during the night so that they can be together.
€¢ Action/Why? Lorenzo helps Jessica escape from Shylock, because he wants to marry her, and knows Shylock will not offer his permission, so he is left with the decision of choosing to follow Shylock's wishes, or secretly sneaking Jessica away from her father.  He chooses the latter option because he is very motivated by his desire to marry Jessica and convert her to Christianity

Jessica

·       ¨ Character(s) Motivation – Jessica wishes to marry Lorenzo, lead happy life with him, and dissociate herself from her father's ways.

·       ¨ Obstacles – She must find a way escape from her father's house and convert to Christianity. However, she is slightly torn because she feels it wrong, or at least tragic, that she should be ashamed of being her father's daughter.

·       ¨ Action/What? – Jessica sends Lorenzo a letter detailing how he should come to rescue her, and the preparations she has made for their new life together (parts of her father's wealth she has taken). She also converts to Christianity.

·       ¨ Action/Why? – Because Jessica is a Jew, it is forbidden for her to marry Lorenzo because he isn't Jewish, and it is forbidden for him to marry her. This gives the reason for both her needing to escape from her father's household and for her to convert to Christianity. Converting to Christianity also helps her to further dissociate herself from her father's ways.

·       ¨ Avowed Action/Why? vs. True Action/Why? – There doesn't seem to be a great difference between her avowed and true actions, however, one might question why she needed to take so much of her father's wealth. Yes, she and Lorenzo are poor and starting a new life with nothing, but as Shylock finds out after their escape, Jessica and Lorenzo have a bit of a spending spree directly following their elopement.

Gratiano

·       ¨ Character(s) Motivation – Gratiano wishes to live his live in a hearty, fun-loving fashion. He also wishes for his friends, especially Antonio and Bassanio, to be as happy as he is.

·       ¨ Obstacles – Gratiano's flippant, talkative manner is off-putting to civilized company. It almost prevents him from accompanying Bassanio on his trip. Shylock's refusing to show mercy to Antonio is an obstacle to Gratiano seeing his friends happy.

·       ¨ Action/What/Why? – Bassanio says that he is willing to take on sober manners and act mildly. It is hard to tell whether he follows through on this or not because the action of the play moves away from him, however, neither Bassanio or Antonio reprimand him again. He accompanies Bassanio on his trip to Belmont, and also on his trip to defend Antonio. Gratiano is quite devoted to both Bassanio and Antonio as they are his close friends. He marries Nerissa in Belmont because he has fallen in love and he feels it will contribute to his happy lifestyle.

 

In looking at the characters, their desires, and their actions, there is a great contrast between all of the Christian characters and Shylock the Jew. Not only are all of the Christian characters "right" and the "good guys" and Shylock "wrong" and the "bad guy," the Christians seem more human. The Christians, even those who have their faults (Antonio mistreating Shylock, Gratiano being overly flippant, etc.) have more human desire and a greater thirst for a good life. They desire things that will make themselves and others happy. Shylock, however, only wants revenge and his "justice." It's as if he is somehow sub-human. The difference is not just about moral rights and wrongs but entire states of being and outlooks on life.  This plays into the overall themes in the play, which focus on what it means to be a good person.

 

IMAGES

·         Dominant Images  – Images/motifs in the play that underscore or augment the play's action

The Pound of Flesh

·        The pound of flesh is a dominant image, because it represents Shylock's lack of mercy and bloodlust.  It is not enough for him to be paid back for his bond in money.  Antonio has always persecuted him for being Jewish and now he must pay with something truly painful, and ultimately life threatening.  This idea of being merciless is important to the play, because it is Shylock's downfall.  He ends up losing his fortune (although it is returned upon his conversion) because he did not take the Christian path and forgive Antonio his debts, or at least take Bassanio's offere of Portia's money.

The Three Caskets

·        Gold, silver and lead

o   The three caskets contain gold, silver and lead.  The prize of Portia's hand in marriage is hidden in the lead casket.  The gold and silver caskets represent wealth and glamor.  They are desirable, but also often chased after by those who are greedy.  The lead is a strong image, because, as the correct choice, it symbolizes risking everything for faith (or in Bassanio and Portia's case, love).  This idea of risk for faith follows the strong pattern of Christian ideals that can be found throughout the play.  The three caskets demonstrate the importance of ignoring greed in order to find something higher, such as love.

·         Repeated Images – Images that reappear throughout the course of the play

 

·        Sea Images:
The sea images apply directly to Antonio having several merchant ships at sea – they remind us again and again that everything is riding on his ships coming back safely. If they don't come back with a profit he dies at Shylock's hand.

·        "€¦the pageants of the sea" (I, 1, line 11)
"Your mind is tossing on the ocean/there where your argosies with portly sail€¦" (I, i, 8-9)
"I should not see the sandy hourglass run/ But I should think of shallows and of flats /and see wealthy Andrew docked in sand/vailing her high top lower than her ribs€¦" (I, i, 25-29)
"But fish not with this melancholy bait/ For this fool gudgeon, this opinion," (I, i, 101-102)
"when he did redeem/the virgin tribute paid by howling Troy/to the sea-monster" (III, 2, lines 57-59)
"€¦with a willow in her hand Upon the wild sea banks, and wav'd her love to come again to Cathage." (V, i, 100)

·        Religious References:
The religious references, many of them specifically Hebrew, are constantly accentuating the big Holy Christian vs. Evil Jew theme.
"When Jacob grazed his uncle Laban's sheep-/This Jacob from our holy Abram was/ As his wise mother wrought in his behalf/ The third possessor," (I, iii, 69-71)
"The Prodigal Christian€¦" (70)
"Black Monday€¦Ash Wednesday€¦" (72)
"Jacob's staff€¦" (72)
"..a gentle and no Jew" (75) – jews are bad
"€¦wise, fair and true€¦" (75)
"This shrine, this mortal breathing saint," (77)
"The figure of an angel" (78)
"Look how the floor of heaven Is thick inlaid with patines of bright gold." (V, i, 102)

·        Nature Images:

The nature images often connect to the people within the play, reinforcing moods through the personification of an animal or element.
"Venus' pigeons fly€¦" (73) Venus is a reference to love and pigeons are common (not fancy).
"Strumpet wind€¦" (74) – prostitute wind
"There are a sort of men whose visages do cream and mantle like a standing pond," (I, i, 88-89)
"the lion's shadow ere himself, And ran dismay'd away" (V, i. 100) "muddy vesture of decay.." Soul will stay on earth if you don't take Christian path.

·        Famous Figures:

These famous figures are used to hyperbolize the situations the characters find themselves in through the use of familiar characters known to audiences.  These characters are also religious figures of Ancient Greece though their notoriety and out-datedness seems to negate the disdain placed upon the other non-Christian images.
"€¦Hang on her temples like a golden fleece/ Which makes her seat of Belmont Colchos' strond/ And many Jasons come in quest of her," (I, i, 169-172).
"If I live to be as old as Sibylla, I will die as chaste as Diana unless I be obtained by the manner of my father's will," (I, ii, 105-107)

·        Misc. Images:

The use of personification in describing Death as not only an entity to be capitalized, but also an animal corpse emphasizes its terribleness.  Bassanio's wedding ring is a symbol of his devotion to his wife, and since he gives it up to repay Antonio's "lawyer" it also symbolizes his gratitude to both the lawyer for helping Antonio, and Antonio for helping him.

"A carrion Death€¦" (78)
Bassiano's wedding ring

·        Images in the Title – Is there a dominant image in the Title? What is its importance?

The Merchant of Venice: The Merchant of Venice is referring to Antonio.  Antonio is worthy of being the title character because he represents the good Christian values reflected in the play.  He is willing to sacrifice not only his fortune, but also his well being for the good of his friend Bassanio, and he expects to gain nothing in return.  He is altruistic and caring.

Themes of play as derived from images:

The predominant images revolve around religious themes, and ideals pertaining to goodness.  For example, as previously stated, the three caskets represent taking a leap of faith and choosing substance over wealth.  All of the Christian images are related to positive ideas, which connect to the fact that within this play Christianity is a symbol of goodness, whereas Judaism is not.  The famous figures and much of the nature, and specifically sea images increase the stakes of the characters in the play, and puts pressure on their decisions between following the good Christian path or falling short.

THEME

¨      Interpret the author's potential messages – what issues is the author exploring

¨      What are the abstract concepts which part of all of the play is "about?"

The play explores the following themes:

Love versus money

·        Shylock chooses money over love, as demonstrated by the fact that when his daughter runs away he is he is preoccupied by the loss of his "ducats." He says, "I shall never see my gold again." He values her in terms of financial dealings and other materials ("precious jewels" "a diamond gone") instead of missing the girl herself.

·        The three caskets that determine Portia's husband contain gold, silver and lead, but despite gold and silver having a higher monetary value, lead is the casket that Portia's picture is in, meaning the suitor who chooses lead will be able to wed Portia.

Taking risks on faith to achieve greater happiness

·        Antonio and Bassanio risk being unable to pay off their debt to Shylock in order for Bassanio to seek the greater happiness derived from being Portia's husband

·        Bassanio risks choosing the wrong casket and being exiled from Portia's company permanently for the chance to choose the right casket and be with Portia for the rest of his life.

Charity and mercy versus hatred and vengeance

·        Antonio is willing to pay for Bassanio to go to Portia and try to marry her, whereas Shylock is unwilling to lend Bassanio the money on goof faith, and must instead have a promise of money or flesh from Antonio

·        Portia is willing to lose large amounts of money to help Antonio pay off his debt to Shylock, even though she has never met Antonio.  She simply believes him to be a good man, and knows that he means a great deal to her husband.

·        Shylock is unwilling to move past his hatred and desire for vengeance when he has a chance to take a pound of Antonio's flesh.  He demands the flesh despite offers of more than the amount of money he is owed, showing no mercy.

·        When Shylock loses everything, Antonio offers him mercy, reinstating his fortunes and sparing his punishment, so long as Shylock converts to Christianity.

All of these themes can be contained within the overarching theme:

·        Supposed Christian values versus Jewish values (or non-Christian values)

o   Christians are supposed to value love over money, choosing to behave in charitable ways, and having great faith.  They should not be greedy, ignoring self-interest in order to bring happiness to others.  Also, they are supposed to be merciful, not wrathful, and choose love and forgiveness over hatred.

What this play is about:

In summary, these themes create a play that comments on what it takes to be a good person.  Looking past the Christian/Jewish stereotypes of the time in which this was written, the characteristics that make a person a "good Christian" in this story are also ideals that make a good person in general. All of the themes comment on different aspects of being a good person, such as choosing love over money and greed, or choosing mercy over vengeance.

Final Post – Things Theatrical and Wrapup

Things Theatrical (Implications included in each element)

The Courtroom Scene

The court scene is the most theatrical scene in the Merchant of Venice. The implication of this scene is the rule of law. At the beginning, Shylock refuses Bassanio's offer for 6,000 ducats because the limit of the contract has passed, and the Duke of Venice cannot stop Shylock from accomplishing the contract because curbing the law would establish a wrong legal precedent. Nevertheless, Shylock is defeated at the end because of a flaw in his contract, and loses everything accordingly to the law. Through this scene, one can see a strong sense of dogmatism, setting the law as absolute rule that cannot be affected by human emotions. At the same time, the fact that the law eventually makes a judgment that agrees with people's moral judgment, to save Antonio and punish Shylock, emphasizes the idea that the law is equal to justice. This idea that the law is absolute justice is similar to how the judgment of the three caskets were portrayed as absolutely right.

The Three Caskets

The scene where Portia's suitors choose from three caskets to find out if they qualify for marrying Portia is another theatrical thing in the Merchant of Venice. Prior to this scene, Portia mocks all her possible fiancés except for Bassanio in the conversation with Nerissa, and it is clear to the audience that Portia will reject a propose by anybody but Bassanio. And indeed, Bassanio is the one who is chosen as the fiancé of Portia. However, Shakespeare chooses to make Bassanio the fiance through this unique idea of three caskets rather than having Portia simply choose him.

One of the functions of this scene is that it allows the audience to see a clear distinction of the ideologies of the three suitors. The reasons that each suitor gives before he chooses a casket reflect the philosophies and ideologies of the suitors. Through this scene, one can see that there is a clear contrast between the philosophy of Bassanio and the other two suitors.

Secondly, instead of having Portia choose her fiancé and explain to each suitor why or why not he was chosen, Shakespeare makes each suitor choose his own fate and the casket explain why or why not he was chosen. This makes the reasons given for the rejection or the acceptation of the suitor appear to be much more credible than being told through Portia's mouth. It is also important that the phrases in the caskets appear like moral precepts. It gives almost an absolute justice to the judgment by the caskets.

Finally, the casket system allows every person, regardless of class, to be judged equally. The caskets function as dogma that judge people based solely on their philosophies and morals.

This whole scene allows Shakespeare to articulate the problem with the nobles that were criticized by Portia in the prior scene. Throughout the play, the nobles are portrayed as superficial people who care only about their appearance, as opposed to Bassanio, who chooses the lead box because he declares that appearance shows the least of something. And because the caskets judged Bassanio as the right one, the audience is directed towards receiving Bassanio's idea as an absolute truth. What is implied by Bassanio's statement is that the morality of a person is higher than his class or appearance. The fact that the suitors were all judged equally under the casket also emphasizes this idea, as the suitors are judged stripped off of their social status and only by their morals or ideologies.

Shylock’s Courtroom Knife

“Bassanio: Why dost thou whet thy knife so earnestly?

Shylock: To cut the forfeiture from that bankrupt there.”

I just thought it was pretty theatrical that Shylock has a knife, in a courtroom, and he's sharpening it. Also, the only thing he was question of was why he was sharpening it. There was no shock that he pulled a knife out in the least, they just needed justification not of its presence, but of its sharpening. To much surprise, we see that Shylock is truly seeking revenge and not the money, as repeated throughout the scene. However, this quest for bloody revenge is hindered by the justice system of Venice, to which he must adhere if he is to have any hope of getting what he wants.

Shylock’s Aside

“(aside) How like a fawning publican he looks!

I hate him for he is a Christian,

But more for that in low simplicity

He lends out money gratis and brings down

The rate of usance here with us in Venice.

If I can catch him once upon the hip,

I will feed fat the ancient grudge I bear him.

He hates our sacred nation, and he rails,

Even there where merchants most do congregate,

On me, my bargains and my well-won thrift,

Which he calls "interest." Cursèd be my tribe

If I forgive him!”

This, from ACT 1 SCENE 3, is what Shylock said as soon as Antonio enters. This is funny because he slanders Antonio's name, Christian beliefs (by extension, his disdain for Jews), and his lack of interest use disrupting the lending market. While said "to himself," he still said all this out loud in the middle of conversation with Bassanio, which is strange. However, it only led to Bassanio and Antonio requesting Shylock's attention, and not about what he said. This also provides the audience with a bit of dramatic irony: we know that Shylock hates Antonio for his prejudicial behavior, but Antonio and Bassanio do not necessarily know the exact extent. Additionally, asides tend to serve as a tool to make the audience feel a a part of the play, further captivating their attention.

 Shylock’s Contract

Among the things theatrical in the Merchant of Venice,  Shylock's contract with Antonio is one of the most memorable scenes. The actual quote reads,

"This kindness will I show.

Go with me not a notary, seal me there

If you reply me not on such a day,

In such a place, such sum or sums as are

Express'd in the condition, let the forfeit

Be nominated for an equal pound

Of you fair flesh, to be cut off and taken

In what part of your body pleaseth me."

This scene has a shocking effect to the audience, as it is an abrupt emergence of violence in the play. Prior to this scene, there is no implication of any form of violence. The emergence of a violent thought in a peaceful time is an implication of how peace is superficial, and violence or grievance is always hidden under. It is also important to note that this line was given by a Jew to a Christian, which implies the profoundness of the cleavage between the two religions.

Comedic Ending

Comedies are known for always ending well even when the buildup may seem hopeless. The Merchant of Venice does just that. The relationships end well and against all odds, Antonio's boats return unscathed, restoring Antonio's fortune. Shylock, however, does not receive the happiest of endings, and depending on how you analyze the script, he may not appear to be the villain he gets labeled from the start. In the courtroom scene, Antonio proposes and the court accepts to:

“So please my lord the duke and all the court,

To quit the fine for one half of his goods

I am content, so he will let me have

The other half in use to render it

Upon his death unto the gentleman

That lately stole his daughter.

Two things provided more: that for this favor

He presently become a Christian;

The other, that he do record a gift

Here in the court, of all he dies possessed,

Unto his son Lorenzo and his daughter.”

A man simply seeking acceptance loses his daughter, all he owns, and even his own religion, of which he was so proud, and forced to convert to those he hated most. With not an ounce of dignity, Shylock is in shambles, having no "happy ending" whatsoever.

Others

Other theatrical elements we found included Shylock’s monologue directed towards Antonio, beginning with a very heated accusation: “He hath disgraced me, and hindered me half a million, laughed at my losses, mocked at my gains, scorned my nation, thwarted my bargains, cooled my friends, heated mine enemies; and what’s his reason? I am a Jew.” (3.1.49-61) This is an emotional high point in the play for Shylock, and allows the audience to see more of his motivations for being so vindictive, even if his logic is somewhat twisted. In essence, this monologue plays on the audience’s sympathies, perhaps leaving them to question whether or not Shylock truly is the objective villain of the play, or if he is a tragic character to be pitied, having been a product of the cruel society that surrounds him and his kind. Additionally, another theatrical element we noticed was the cross-dressing of Portia and Nerissa, posing as a lawyer and a clerk. This concept of identity confusion is very common in many Shakespearean comedies, Twelfth Night being a prime example. These identity (and often gender) mix-ups add a sense of dramatic irony to the play, and simply put it can be very entertaining and comedic for an audience to be in on a big secret while the characters on-stage are not. Finally, there is Portia and Nerissa’s dialogue about the European noblemen. This serves as a thinly veiled, biting satire of the aristocracies of different countries, some of these unfair stereotypes even endure to this day (the German prince is a drunkard, Scots  are violent and hate the English, etc.). This dialogue would have been thoroughly entertaining for the audiences of Shakespeare’s day, and would have been one of the high comedic parts of the entire play.

Wrap-Up

– To summarize, according to the elements of the play we noticed through stasis/intrusion, obstacles/conflict, and things theatrical, it would not be inappropriate to claim that the theme of obligation endures throughout the play. It is one of the primary motivating forces for many of the characters, and yet also places obstacles in the way of other characters. The eternal question of loyalty to others versus self-integrity is definitely present here, and is a conflict that many of the characters must deal with. This ties in with an underlying theme of law/justice versus morality, represented by the court scene. Also, quite obviously, the religious tension between Christians and Jews comes to the forefront of this play. Additionally, the question is raised in the course of the story as to whether Shylock is truly the villain of this play. Sure, he is vengeful and nasty, acting mainly out of a desire for revenge. However, it would not be a stretch of the imagination to claim that he is simply an unfortunate product of his environment, as he states in his monologue, and that he has learned his cruelty from the Christians who practiced it upon him. Due to this question, it has been asked whether The Merchant of Venice is truly a comedy. As far as an analysis of theatrical elements goes, we conclude that there are enough comedic elements (identity confusion, neat/happy ending, satire/fooling, etc.) to comfortably classify this play as a comedy. However, this does not mean that the enduring questions mentioned above regarding obligation, morality, religion, and discrimination are discounted or made any less important.

Final Post – Obstacles and Conflict

Major Conflicts

– Portia's desire vs. her father's will: she wants to marry a man like Bassanio but is obligated to marry only the first man to pass her father's test

– Antonio and Bassanio vs. Shylock: the situation with the loan (terms and Shylock's tenacious adherence to them) and their inability to repay Shylock

– Shylock vs. Christian society's disdain of Jews (as represented by Antonio and Bassanio's attitudes toward him)

– Jessica/Lorenzo vs. Shylock: this conflict directly leads to Jessica's elopement (Shylock would not allow her to see Lorenzo or any of his friends, thus they hatch a plan to elope together)

– Bassanio/Gratiano and their feelings of obligation to the "lawyers" vs. the promises they made to keep Portia's/Nerissa's rings (a very interesting dynamic in the final scenes of the play)

Obstacles by Character (at various points in the play)

– Antonio: Shylock's vehement adherence to the terms of the loan agreement (the primary obstacle), Bassanio's heterosexuality and love for Portia (if Antonio's love for Bassanio is seen as more than platonic), lack of cash (all his money is tied up in his ships abroad)

– Bassanio: lack of money/social status with which to woo Portia, Portia's father's will, Shylock and the loan

"O my Antonio, had I but the means to hold a rival place with [Portia's suitors]€¦" (Bassanio, 1.1.172-173)

– Portia: her father's will (inability to marry Bassanio straightaway), her own intelligence and rationality coupled with Bassanio giving her ring away (she seems unable to completely trust Bassanio and so devises the ring scheme, only forgiving Bassanio after Antonio vouches for him)

"I may neither choose who I would, nor refuse who I dislike, so is the will of a living daughter curbed by the will of a dead fther." (Portia, 1.2.19-21)

"Then you shall be his surety. Give him this [ring] and bid him keep it better than the other." (Portia, 5.1.254-255)

– Shylock: anti-Semitism (widespread, general mistrust of Jews in Christian Venice), legal system of Venice (prevents him from easily enacting revenge on those who have wronged him)

"The devil€¦an evil soul€¦a villain€¦a goodly apple with a rotten heart€¦" (Antonio, referring to Shylock, 1.3.90-93)

– Launcelot Gobbo: the dishonor he will incur by abandoning his master (Shylock)

"The Jew my master who€¦is a kind of devil; and to run away from the Jew I should be ruled by the fiend who€¦is the devil himself." (Launcelot, 2.2.17-20)

– Jessica: her father's feud with Antonio et al. (due to which he will not let her see Lorenzo)

"Hear you me, Jessica, lock up my doors€¦nor thrust your head into the public street to gaze on Christian fools€¦" (Shylock, 2.5.27-32)

Implications of Obstacle and Conflict

– It seems to me that a great many of the obstacles and conflicts mentioned come about because of societal norms and/or nonverbal social contracts. Again, this raises the enduring concept of obligation: characters struggle between fulfilling their obligations to society/friends/family and fulfilling their own individual desires. Also, above I mentioned the concept of a social contract, which would gain great importance in the distant future, thanks to the writings of such philosophers as Hobbes, Locke, and Rousseau. This social contract governing how humans interact with one another provides an interesting parallel to the physical, business contract drawn up by Shylock. Clearly, this play is pointing to a distinct gap between the natural inclinations of the characters and the actions they feel obligated to undertake because of these social contracts. In many cases (Launcelot, Portia, and Jessica especially), this conflict boils down to a common decision: follow orders, or follow your heart.

Final Post – Stasis and Intrusion

Stasis

–  Antonio, a Venetian merchant, is experiencing an apparently unexplainable depression, while his closest friend Bassanio has been harboring a secret love. Meanwhile, in Belmont,  the beautiful, rich, and intelligent heiress Portia is bound by her father's will not to marry a suitor of her own choosing. All the suitors that have come, however, to attempt her dead father's trial have been quite undesirable.

Implications of Proposed Stasis

– The stasis I have proposed has a great deal to do with the twin concepts of love and marriage. This suggests that these will be some of the primary motivating factors for the characters mentioned in the stasis (Shylock, especially, is excluded from this €˜love and marriage' motivation). It has been theorized that Antonio's motivation is an intense love for Bassanio, Bassanio (obviously) is motivated by his love for Portia, Lorenzo acts out of an infatuation with Jessica, and finally there is Gratiano and Nerissa. All of these pairs, in some way or another, have their actions informed by their love and/or romantic feelings for one another.

Intrusion

– The intrusion, in my opinion, would be one of two things: Bassanio's confession of his love for Portia (to Antonio) or his request for a loan from Antonio. Both of these disrupt the stasis in a way, but I think Bassanio's request for a loan is more significant since it directly leads to the introduction of Shylock into the storyline, and also allows Bassanio to pursue Portia, thus allowing for the two worlds of Belmont and Venice to be intertwined through their characters. Also, obviously, the request for a loan triggers the formation of the loan agreement, which is one of the primary driving forces in the play’s action.

Implications of Intrusion

– My proposed intrusion (the loan request) subtly introduces the theme of the importance of money in Venetian (and Belmontian) society: Bassanio cannot woo Portia unless he can dress and travel like a prince. Also, as stated, it introduces Shylock and the role of the Jew as a moneylender in the society of the play. And again, this intrusion indirectly leads to two very separate worlds that would not otherwise unite coming together in the play's storyline. Somewhat more significantly, however, this request introduces the concept of obligation, which is a huge factor throughout the play: Portia is obligated to follow her father's will, Bassanio feels obligated to pay back Antonio somehow, Antonio is obligated to repay Shylock, and Bassanio is obligated to keep Portia's ring safe. This, along with the ‘love and marriage’ factors mentioned above in the implications of the stasis,is one of the primary motivating factors, and veen obstacles, for many of the major characters.

Final implications of backwards and forwards

Hey everyone, so here are our implications expanded and with examples and what we think the play is about based on our analysis. feel free to add on with comments or additional posts. if you think i should change anything just say the word.

Implications:

 

            After having done our plot analysis both backwards and forwards, we have come up with a few discrepancies or differences between the two ways of plotting the action. First, we noticed that, in doing the plot backwards, it permitted us to focus a lot more on the details of how the story moves forward. There are many different story lines in Merchant of Venice and by going backwards we got a better understanding of how the relationships relate to one another and how they are ultimately connected. We were able to notice more highlighted relationships (Portia and Bassanio and their relationship with Antonio) versus less forwarding relationships in the play (Lorenzo and Jessica). The story line of Antonio and Bassanio constructing this entire plan to get money and in turn Portia really moves the story forward; where as Jessica and Lorenzo add to Shylock's character and why he is so angry, they do not forward the story as much.

            Another difference we found working both directions was how the focus of the plot shifted based on the direction we were plotting. When we plotted forwards our plot focused more on the relationship between Portia and Bassanio, how their love fuels the other actions and we did not have Antonio being a character with many forwards. However, plotting backwards we noticed that the story more intimately follows Antonio and his promise to help Bassanio get Portia, which forwards the action of getting the money loaned in the first place. Instead of it being Portia and Bassanio forwarding most of the action, when we did it in reverse Antonio's relationship to the loan and his need for his ships to arrive so he can pay it back without Shylock killing him forwards the action more.

            Lastly, one more thing we noticed that stuck out to us when doing the plot backwards was the complexity of the splits and returns in the plot branches. When doing it forward it was much easier to follow, all the sub plots broke apart and defined themselves throughout the play and came back together at the end nice and neat. In plotting backwards we did not get the same clean results. All the plots come together at the end still, but when they broke apart we found many ways in which they slightly connected to other sub-plots instead of being their own complete stories that simply collide at the end. For example, backwards the meeting and agreement of the loan forces four different forwards to occur which reconnect before the trial over the loan even begins and during the trial we find a few branches off the unison story line, but when we did it forwards they do not connect until the trial is over. Plotting backwards is much more of a web than the defined linear progressions of the forwards.

 

What the play is about based on our analysis:

 

            Based on our analysis of the forwards and backwards plot we believe the play is meant to highlight the good outcomes of playing by the rules or strictly following the law. Portia gets exactly what she wants: Bassanio, by not waving the rules her father intended for her to find a suitor. She did not cheat or lie with any of her suitors, and love found her just as she wanted it. Also, we discovered that Antonio lives solely because Portia follows the law as literally and strictly as possible. Shylock could have gotten away with killing Antonio over the loan by taking a pound of flesh, but it is Portia who notes that if he bleeds, the law is no longer in Shylock's favor and he will then be in trouble with the law. Portia defines the details of the law to help Antonio survive. With that being said through these actions we can say that Shakespeare was trying to focus on the difference between greediness versus generosity. Shylock is a greedy man who only wants what is best for him (money) and will take down anyone in his way (Antonio and his own daughter Jessica and her lover Lorenzo). However, Antonio, Bassanio and Portia in the play are all working together and generously helping one another to find what they each desire. It is their generosity that wins over Shylock's greediness in the end. 

Implications of Forwards

According to Ball, forwards are first and foremost a tool used by playwrights to keep the audience actively engaged in the play and prevent them from losing interest.  However, their secondary function is to call attention to important thematic elements of the play.  Some of the forwards in Merchant of Venice serve in this capacity, once again using forwards including the confrontation between Antonio and Shylock, the ring subplot at the play’s end, and Antonio’s mercantile ventures to draw attention to religious conflict, morality, and financial themes in the play.

Implications of Exposition

Because the play is based on a medieval story, Shakespeare’s exposition is important because it establishes the differences between his adaptation and the original tale.  The thematic elements introduced to Merchant of Venice require some adjustments to the information presented in exposition.  For example, Shakespeare’s version of the challenge to win Portia’s hand fits better with the play’s heightened emphasis on religious values and morality, especially since Portia represents a virtuous Christian character diametrically opposed to Shylock the Jew.  Shakespeare also inserts exposition detailing Antonio’s willingness to lend Bassanio money on top of his already existing debt as a way to further develop the contrast between the “Christian” philosophy of charitable giving and the “Jewish” method of extortion/usury practiced by Shylock.  Finally, Shakespeare’s exposition at the beginning of the play establishes that most central characters are wealthy and relate to each other through financial transactions (another predominant theme in this play).