But Do It Backwards- Act 3

By Eric Houdek

SCENE 1 STILL NEEDS TO BE DONE! 

-The Duke laments that Angelo “kills for faults of his own liking.”  He remarks that Angelo will be revealed as a hypocrite and suffer the consequences of his actions.   

-Escalus leaves to visit Claudio.   

-The Duke tells Escalus that he has been counseling Claudio, and Claudio is prepared for death. 

-Escalus tells the Duke that he has been pleading with Angelo for Claudio’s release, but if it is not granted, Claudio must be prepared for death. 

-Escalus says that Lucio will have to answer to Mistress Overdone’s claims.   

-Mistress Overdone accuses Lucio of getting Kate Keepdown pregnant.   

-Escalus, Provost, and Officers with Mistress Overdone enter.  

-Lucio leaves.

-Lucio responds that he would have no fear of doing so. 

-The Duke defends “The Duke.”  He asks Lucio if he would say these things to the Duke’s face.

-Lucio remarks about Angelo’s poor leadership and overuse of punishment.  He says that punishment will not deter sin, for it is in human nature.  Lucio makes remarks about the Duke. 

-The Duke responds he has no idea.   

-Lucio asks the disguised Duke if he knows where the Duke is.   

-Lucio enters. 

Scene 2

But Do It Backwards- Act 2

By Eric Houdek 

-Isabella decides to go visit Claudio in prison and tell him of Angelo’s request. 

-Angelo tells Isabella that nobody will believe her.  He also adds that if she does not accept his proposition, her brother will suffer a long and painful death.  Angelo tells Isabella that she has one day to decide whether she will accept his proposition and exits. 

-Isabella threatens to tell everyone about Angelo’s request.

-Angelo reasserts that Claudio will not die if  Isabella does accepts his request for sexual relations.  The seriousness of his request is established. 

-Isabella tells Angelo that he is a hypocrite for putting Claudio death for loving Juliet, while he is in the act of stating his love for her. 

-Angelo tells Isabella that she is being just as much as a tyrant as she is accusing him of being.  He adds that he truly loves her.   

-Isabella claims that she cannot redeem her brother through sin.   

-Angelo asks Isabella if she would have sexual relations with him in order to save her brother.  (“treasures of your body”)

-Isabella responds that it would be worth a sin to save her brother life. 

-Angelo asks Isabella if it would be worth sin to save her brother’s life.

Scene 3

-The Duke tells Juliet that he will leave to see her lover, who will die the next day.   

-Juliet repents her sin.   

-The Duke realizes that the sexual encounter between Claudio and Juliet was consentual.(“mutually committed”) 

-The Duke initiates conversation with Juliet, asking her if she repents of her sin.   

-Juliet enters the prison.   

-The Duke enters the prison disguised as a Friar. 

Scene 2 

-Angelo realizes that he sexually desires Juliet. 

-As she leaves, Isabella tells Angelo that she would bribe him.

-Angelo tells Isabella to return the next day. 

-Isabella continues to plead with Angelo.   

-Lucio tells Isabella to touch Angelo.

– Isabella continues to plead with Angelo. 

-Lucio tells Isabella to continue pleading with Angelo.

-Angelo tells Isabella that those who break the law must be punished.   

-Isabella says she abhors Claudio’s vice, but begs for his pardon.   

-Isabella enters.

But Do It Backwards-Act 1

By Eric Houdek 

-Isabella says she will leave to try to influence Angelo.

-Lucio continues to argue with Isabella, telling her that women have a degree of power over men.   

-Isabella tells Lucio that she has little power to do anything. 

-Lucio tells Isabella that Claudio has gotten Juliet pregnant, and has been sentenced to death.    

-Lucio calls out to Isabella at the nunnery. 

Scene 4

-The Duke says that crime has gotten out of control.  Additionally, the Duke establishes that he intends to see whether or not Angelo’s resolute appearance is false. 

-Friar Thomas inquires as to why the Duke wishes to be hidden.   

-The Duke asks Friar Thomas to hide him.   

-The Duke enters a monastary.

  Scene 3

-Claudio asks Lucio to find his sister so she can appeal on his behalf to Angelo. 

-Lucio visits Claudio in prison. 

-Claudio is imprisoned for lechery. 

 Scene 2

-The Duke tells Angelo that he must leave right away, and he is given control of the city of Vienna. 

-Angelo enters. 

-Escalus approves of Angelo.   

-The Duke tells Escalus that he must leave the city, and asks if Angelo would be the right person to choose to leave in control of the city. 

 -The Duke sends an attendant for Angelo.

Scene 1 

Main actions

By Eric Houdek

Alright, I think it might be a good idea to post some of the important actions that occured during the play, some of them coming directly from our discussion. 

-The Duke grants Angelo temporary leadership of Vienna. 

-Claudio is taken to prison for having sexual involvement outside of mariage. 

-Claudio asks Lucio to find his sister Isabella, so Isabella can appeal for him on Claudio’s behalf. 

-The Duke goes to a monastary and asks Friar Thomas to hide him so he can observe Angelo. 

-Isabella agrees to leave the monastery to help Claudio.

-Isabella goes to Angelo to beg for forgiveness.  Mentions that she wishes to bribe him. 

-Angelo realizes he has desire for Isabella.  Tells Isabella to return the next day.

-Angelo makes his proposal to Isabella-to have sexual relations with him to save Claudio’s life. 

-Isabella denies Claudio’s proposal. 

-Isabella visits Claudio in jail, tells him about Angelo’s proposal. 

-Angelo asks Isabella to follow the proposal, Isabella rebukes him.   

-Duke hatches plan involving Mariana, and tells Isabella about it. 

-Duke introduces Mariana to Isabella, the three discuss the plan. 

 * I still need to add more actions, feel free to ammend, add, or disagree.

Compiled Version-Idea and Metaphor

IDEA

A. Meaning of the Title

Death of a Salesman.

The paradox and importance of the title
Willy, the salesman, kills himself in the name of what he perceives; that is capitalism. This is the critique Miller puts forward. He does so by exposing the paradoxical nature of a system. This paradox is exposed by their constant appearances and recurrence.

"Killing in the name of" by Rage Against the Machine, has death as first word and name as for salesman. I like this metaphorical analogy. Because Willy kills himself, so he kills. And the in the name of, can be applied to the different plausible reasons for why he committed suicide. he killed himself in the name of money, for 20 thousand. he killed himself in the name of family, although he misperceives the value of his life, as put forward by the constant paradox behind the idea.

B. Nominative Phrase That Expresses Meaning of the Play

When the means to an end become the end, the end itself prompts the end of the common man”

C. Philosphical Statements Made In The Play

Willy: Figure it out. Work a lifetime to pay off ahouse. You finally own it, and there's nobody to live in it.(Pg. 15)

Willy: Not finding yourself at the age of thirty-four is a disgrace!" (Pg. 16)

Willy: The world is an oyster but you don't crack it open on a matress!(Page 41)

Charley: When a deposit bottle is broken you don't get your nickel back.(Page 44)

Willy: Without a penny to his name, three great universities are begging for him, and from there the sky's the limit, becuse it's not what you do, Ben. It's who you know and the smile on your face! It's contacts, Ben, contacts!(Page 86)

Howard: Kid, I can't take blood from a stone(Pg. 81)

Linda:Linda: Biff, a man is not a bird, to come and go with the springtime.(Pg. 54)

Bernard: Yeah, I'm going. He takes the bottle. Thanks, Pop. He picks up his rackets and bag. Good-by Willy, and don't worry about it. You know, "If at first you don't succeed€¦"

Willy: Yes I believe in that.

Bernard: But sometimes, Willy, it's better for a man just to walk away.

Willy: Walk away?

Bernard: That's Right

Willy: But what if you can't walk away?

Bernard, after a slight pause: I gues that's when it's tough.(Page 95)

Charley:Willy, when're you gonna realize that them things don't mean anything? you named him Howard, but you can't sell that. the only thing you got in this world is what you can sell. And the funny thing is that you're a salesman and don't know that.(Page 97)

Willy, moving to the right: Funny, y'know? After all the highways, and the trains, and the appointment, and the years, you end up worth more dead than alive.(Page 98)

Willy: A man can't go out the way he came in, Ben, a man hast got to add up to something.(Page 125)

Biff: Pop, I'm a dime a dozen and so are you.(132)

Charley: No man only needs a little salary.(137)

D. How the Action Leads Directly To The Idea

The following is a listing of the crucial actions which lead to the idea.

-Willy makes the decision to become a salesman (after meeting Mr. Singleman)

-Will argues with Howard, asserting the characteristics of his own ideal salesman, resulting in the loss of his job.

-Willy asks Bernard what his secret to success is.

-Biff argues with Willy, telling him he will leave forever, and cries.

-Willy takes his own life.

-Linda makes her final statement to Willy.

Upon making the decision to become a salesman after meeting Mr. Singleman, Willy embarks upon a journey that will end with the taking of his own life. Flashing forward many years, Willy has an argument with his boss Howard, in which he stresses ideals that conflict with the reality of a salesman. Willy's inability to convince his boss to let him keep his job, while he had gone to his boss with intentions of getting a better job in New York, leaves Willy without a job. This leaves Willy without a means to support his family and a glimmer of hope to make it big. When Willy runs into Bernard, he asks him what the big secret to success is. Bernard responds by basically telling Willy that hard work is what it takes, and the reason for the downfall of Willy's son Biff is that Biff was never prepared for future work himself. When Biff tries to give him advice, Willy refuses to accept it by saying he does not need that garbage. He, by doing what has been previously stipulated, rejects his son. These assertions clearly identify that Willy is using the wrong means to go about getting what he wants, leaving the reader to infer that Willy's delusional view of the world contributes to his demise.(and his sons') As the play nears an end, Willy has one final argument with his son Biff, where his son expresses that he will leave forever. However, during this argument, Biff cries, indicating to Willy that his son still has love for him. Upon this realization, Willy is driven to make the ultimate sacrifice, killing himself for the "well being" of his family, in which they will receive a $20,000 reward. However, it is after Willy's death that his warped sense of reality is concretely displayed to the reader. Biff states that he will be moving West, showing the reader that Willy's death has had no effect on him. If there is a cash reward, Biff will certainly not be using it. Linda explains that she cannot understand why Willy has acted the way he has. She clearly identifies the paradox of Willy's actions by saying that she has finished paying off the house, but there is nobody to live in it. This paradox which is expressed throughout the course of the play, is that of a man within the system of capitalism, crucial to Arthur Miller's critique of the American dream, and postwar writings of the twentieth century.

Metaphor

You can’t get love from stone.

Willy, is a man who is influenced by the American dream. His goal is to make it big in the business world and support and care for his family. As we narrowed down his goals to these two general statements, we realized that even these fit into a larger, more fully encompassing description if what Willy wants. That is to say, he wants the American Dream. The jungle, for willy, is the how of that dream. He perceives the jungle story as a coming of age story, where Ben stepped in a poor boy and stepped out a rich man. Alejandro stated that Willy never really grasped the full idea of the jungle, only taking the object of wealth as the important factor in the jungle. What Willy fails to see about this American Dream is the PROCESS. He is too caught up in the "make it big easy" idea, for this is why he went into being a salesman in the first place. Why work with your hands when you can make it big as a salesman! But he realizes that he actually can't make it big as a salesman because of his idea of the American Dream as something "magical," an illusion that will sweep him up as long as he smiles and gets to know people. As we see, these illusions manifest themselves as characters of Willy's past, reaffirming his own strange beliefs. When he begins to discover his inability to be a big shot salesman, he begins to create his own illusion for his children and family.

As the play progresses and eventually comes to an end, it is proven that Willy’s methods to achieve success are greatly flawed. Willy’s delusional nature is illustrated through his failure, willingness to to embrace his methods after failure, and literal delusions from the past. As the play comes to an end, Willy’s misunderstanding of the process is still greatly flawed. He ends up killing himself for his family, when all he does is hurt his family. This greatly ties in to the metaphor of “you can’t get love from a rock,” similar to statements in the play such as ” I can’t squeeze blood from stone and “You can’t break an oyster on a mattress.” Willy’s inability to understand the process and reality are what pull him farther and farther away from what he wants.

Quotes for Metaphor Work-Idea and Metaphor

Eric Houdek 

1. Shell on the mattress analogy. (Willy p.41)(full quote)

Willy: What’s the mystery?  The man knew what he wanted and went out and got it.  Walked into a jungle, and comes out, the age of twenty-one, and he’s rich.  The world is an oyster, but you don’t crack it open on a mattress!

2. Bird comment. ( Linda to Biff p.54)( full quote)

Linda: Biff, a man is not a bird, to come and go with the springtime.

3. JUNGLE (Ben's and Willy's response p.52) (full quote)

Ben, giving great weight to each word, and with a certain vicious audacity: William, when I walked into the jungle, I was seventeen.  When I walked out I was twenty-one.  And, by God, I was rich!  He goes off into the darkeness around the right corner of the house.

Willy:…was rich!  That’s just the spirit I want to imbue them with!  To walk into a jungle!  I was right!  I was right!  I was right!

Idea and Metaphor- Actions Leading to Meaning

By Eric Houdek

I will assume that our nominal phrase which expresses the meaning of the play is “When the means to an end become the end, the end itself prompts the end of the common man.”

-Willy’s decision to become a saleseman.  This decision is made in the assumption that he will be able to make a lot of money, which will help him to provide for his family and “make it big.”  Willy explains that he has had other opportunities for employment, but he makes the decision to become a salesman because he has met Dave Singleman. 

Just starting it off…I will continue to add….

Idea and Metaphor- Metaphor

By Eric Houdek 

As we talked about earlier, there were two metaphors from the play that encompassed the whole meaning of the play. 

Howard: Kid, I can’t take blood from a stone(Pg. 81)

Willy: The world is an oyster, but you can’t crack it open on a mattress.(pg. 41)

Both of these metaphors summarize the play itself.  Willy Loman is a man who believes that being well liked by everyone will lead to sucess in the real world.  This is evident when he tells Biff that Bernard will never succeed in the real world because being a book worm does nothing to add to his popularity.  This ties in to the fact that Willy is a delusional character. Although he literally sees delusions throughout the course of the play, Willy has a warped perception of reality.  Willy embraces the American dream, which is to “make it big” and to take care of his family.  However, Willy uses the salesman Dave Singleman to make the decision to use “salesmanship” as the means to achieve the American dream.  There is nothing deceptive about Singleman’s name.  He dies a SINGLE MAN, and most likely he didn’t die with a lot of money, for he had to be out working at the age of 84.  It is with a warped sense of reality that Willy sets out to conquer the world.  Raising his children, Willy chooses not to instill many disciplinary values in his children, and even looks down upon Charley’s son Bernard for being a nerd.  As time passes by, and it is evident that many of Willy’s means of achieving success have not been successful, Will still comes to the conclusion that he can take care of his family by killing himself to achieve an insurance reward of $20,000.  He commits this act, but once again, he is using the wrong means to address the problem.  He leaves his wife a widow, his son Biff has no intentions of using money for the sake of business and has plans of moving away, and it is entirely possible that the insurance company did not even honor the policy.

SO WE NEED TO FINALIZE OUR METAPHOR…

Idea and Metaphor-Construction of Nominal Phrase Used to Express Idea

By Eric Houdek 

Alright, for assigning our statement to the meaning of the play, I think there are a few crucial factors we must consider€¦

-Willy Loman followed the American dream, and it failed him. 

-Willy Loman believed that all a man needed to succeed was to be well liked by his peers.  This belief failed him as well as his son Biff.

-Biff Loman realized that his father and his family were common people, not destined for greatness. 

-Although Happy Loman says that Willy did not die in vain, it is clearly evident that he did.  Willy Loman sacrificed his life to get some meaning out of it by obtaining it for his son Biff so he can "make it big," when Biff shows no intentions of doing so.  In fact, he plans on moving out West.  It is not even clear at the end of the play if the $20,000 is honored. 

-Do to his dependence on his belief that all a man needs is to be liked by everyone to succeed, Biff fails to reinforce many key values in his sons.  Willy fails to discourage his children from stealing, and fails to place a value in hard work and respect for women. 

-There is a great emphasis on this play placed on delusion. 

-Hopefully this information will help us to brainstorm about the nominal statement identifying the idea in the play…