Erica Brotzman — Help

Hey guys,

I’ve organized the bullet points of the dramatic action but I’m having a little trouble with the “imagistic descriptive phrase” for the units.  Also we only have to breakdown 2 units right?  Also, i’m a tad confused about where to break up my units.  Any suggestions??

Right now I have the first unit ending when his sons wake up after his return. and the 2nd when the household goes to sleep after Willy’s return. How does that sound?