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Week 2 Experiential Reflections

Our second week at the detention center ran very smoothly. I felt much more comfortable walking into the building than last week. The first thing I noticed walking into the classroom were all the basketball shoe drawings covered on the wall. They added a lot of personality to the room, making it more welcoming. I talked to the guy who took our IDs (I forgot his name) and he shared how the kids loved the activity. To them, it’s a tradition.

I loved the activities we did for class. I worked with J. and we connected very well with one another. The activity was also very engaging for us. As one of the other students said, sharing our future dreams through storytelling makes it come to life. It opens up the possibility. J. told me that his superpowers would be similar to Superman.  He wanted to use his powers to help others, whether it be fixing buildings or catching the bad guys.  When it came to his dreams, he imagined gaining new perspectives by traveling around the world, one location being Hong Kong. He dreamed of being at the top of a mountain looking over the trees and the horizon. One aspect that both of our stories share is having a family. J. wants to have a family, and then become a grandfather playing with his grandchildren.

 

a few observations of the first day at Henrico

I was surprised by how different the justice complex looked in the dark, and I had trouble finding my way to the right building entrance.  And then when I had to get Angelos from the other side of the campus, I was glad I had driven my car! SO the beginning of the night got my adrenaline going, but in a way that was actually helpful.

I was most surprised at this: some of the youth who are there have been taken there into “protective custody” because of violence or abuse at home.  And they are in the same mix with violent offenders and non-violent offenders.  They are all just young humans who have experienced more than their fair share of trauma.  But It made me think how hard it would be to work as one of the guards/guides there.  I wonder what they think of as their goal with these short-term visitors with different issues…

I was pleased the youths there warmed up quickly to the idea of stories. As always, I was impressed by the intelligence and curiosity of many of the kids.  I didn’t get to hear many stories as I bounced from room to room, but I saw lots of good sharing going on. Hearing Haven and Angelos’ stories in the car on the way back about the kinds of stories the girls told was very interesting.  Looking forward to reading more in everyone’s posts.

Detention Center Blog

Today was my first time to go to a detention center, and I felt a strong sense of freshness in my heart. When I arrived at the detention center, the place where the juvenile offenders were held was more cozy than I had imagined – the colorful walls, the basketball gymnasium and the white walls covered with graffiti were full of the humanistic atmosphere that is rare in a detention center.

I was apprehensive about meeting this group of juveniles, as I had no previous experience with them.  After introducing themselves, I asked them what their respective dreams were – some said something like being an engineer, some said they wanted to take over his dad’s business after getting their Business Diploma, and others wanted to go into music. It was clear that they were a group of teenagers with dreams and souls – but who had made a “dumb decision” that they would regret for the rest of their lives. But they all have aspirations for a new life, and they all mention that they don’t want to go back to detention center – possibly because of the grumpy buffs and the militaristic nature of the place.

After listening to my story, J told me his story – he got here because he was in a racing competition when he got into trouble with someone and hurt them on purpose. He is fluent in English and Spanish – because he is Hispanic, and the other juvenile offender we interacted with is also Hispanic, but he doesn’t speak English. I tried to talk to him, telling him that it was a blessing in disguise and encouraging him to look toward the future – he held my hand as he said goodbye, as if he had found a soul mate – something no one talks to them about at the detention center.

Prep Note 2/2

Reading “The Body Keeps The Score” reminded me of a lot of the things I learned when I took AP Psychology in high school. Many of the examples or experiences Kolk referenced were ones I’ve heard of before, for example, the learned helplessness experiment tested on dogs or the serotonin inhibitor experiment on mice. Since that class I’ve been interested in how the human mind works, and I was happy to find out that the selected passages from the book don’t read too much like dry, analytical lab notes and more like a humanistic account of the psychology behind trauma and mental illness. I also really appreciated the hands-on experience and insider knowledge within the psychopharmacology field that Kolk could demonstrate through writing,

Power Point for today’s presentation

HERE is the presentation

Class Notes Response 11/28/23

Relatability is a tool in storytelling. A lot of relatability, in my opinion, is simply having the experience of being a person in common. Another factor branching off of this is how easy it is to imagine ourselves in another scenario or situation, such as ones described in stories.

A huge factor that contributed to making virtual school feel so uncomfortable was the choice that everyone had to turn their cameras off. Given the choice between showing their face and staying hidden, most people chose the ladder due to the fear of being judged or watched by others behind a screen. In-person school forces us to be present and, as Haven said, offers a lot of socialization that a lot of people take for granted (including me). Forcing students to interact with each other is better than nobody having that interaction.

help me make the instructions better

Thank you for putting such good energy into the workshop today.  I was reflecting on my experience.  I only heard bits and pieces of each group, but what struck me was that there was a paradigm at work that I didn’t realize would be so powerful: the “assignment” paradigm.  It makes sense, in retrospect.  Assignments by definition are not really your own idea. They may not feel much like creating art.  But actually, you are making choices and putting things together in order to communicate with a reader, and that is what creative writers do.

I revised the instruction sheet so that they more explicitly situate the essay as art.  I would love it if you would read these over, and give me suggestions for how to make them better!  Thanks

The Art of the Essay Workshop

Goals:

  1. to experience an essay as a work of art
  2. receive feedback that gets at the content and the heart of your essay

 

Instructions:

Give your critique partner a copy of your draft essay.

Read your partner’s draft.

Imagine you have just found this essay sitting on a table in your dorm and you picked it up to read it.  Notice how you react to it as a reader. Would you keep reading all the way to the end?

Write notes to respond to Step 1 and Step 3 below. Each partner should take turns in role of writer and responder, and the pair should follow these steps for discussion:

Step 1. Statements of Meaning

Responder states what was meaningful, evocative, interesting, exciting, and/or striking in the work they have just witnessed/read.

 

Step 2. Writer as Questioner

The writer asks questions about the work. In answering, responders stay on topic with the question and may express opinions in direct response to the artist’s questions.

Ex: Did you understand what I meant by the title?

 

Step 3. Neutral Questions

Responders ask neutral questions about the work, and the artist responds. Questions are neutral when they do not have an opinion couched in them.

This step is one of the most fundamental, challenging, and misunderstood steps of Critical Response Process.

Examples: Can you say  more about your interpretation of _____ ?

What does your title mean to you?

 

Step 4. Opinion Time

Responders state opinions, given permission from the artist; the artist has the option to say no.

 

Please leave feedback and suggestions in the comments.

Class Notes 11-02-23

Technologies have changed cultures and language. Writing allows communication with a person across rooms.  We have not figured out how to communicate well enough without conflict.

The author is telling here narrator as a child through childish ways. Comparing WOWO memoir writing to visuals. What if the WOWO writer used images? How would it change their stories?

Stan evokes visuals of Moses flowing down the river in a basket.  Provoked our thoughts on adoption

The author is making sense of painful topics without making them seem painful.

What’s a story? Would our ideas of a story become more compelx now that we’ve been exposed to different forms of storytelling?

We’re sharing another personal story with our partners.  How do we make memories into stories?

We can use artistry and improvise details. Consider your audience. Think of the structure, beginning, middle, and end. The storyteller makes meaning out of their stories.  Words can create a picture for the audience. Share a story where you can remember a time when you had an experience that you reflected back on later in your life because it taught you something.

Prep Note 11/07

Mmachi Domoriaku explores the concept of identity through oral storytelling. More specifically, she shares the struggles she faces as a Nigerian immigrant in NY even regarding her name. Therefore, she decides to change her name to fit into American standards. However, she soon realizes that her name is a huge part of her identity highlighting her origins. Similarly, when I left my home at the of 16, I started introducing myself using my English name on my passport which sounds different but it is easier for English speakers to pronounce. However, my closest friends in Singapore started calling me by my Greek name because they insisted on doing so and that made me realize how people who respect your identity should be at least trying to call you by how you want to be called. Even in this university, many people started calling me by my Greek name after they requested to do so. I am really not used to people calling me by my Greek name except for my people so I feel almost nostalgic and much closer to home every time that I hear someone calling me by my name!

Prep Note 11/02

The last lesson was one of the most fun ones. I am generally involved in arts and have taken visual art courses before so it was a great opportunity to combine this passion with storytelling. Even though I have experience in different media, the different forms stories can be told really surprised me and allowed me to rethink potential ways I would like to communicate my stories. During the lesson, I created the outline of a story I would like to communicate. That was the birth of my younger brother when I was 12 years old! I thought of creating a timeline of significant periods of time in his life as a way of communicating my gratitude towards him. Overall, I loved the creative process of creating our own story and hearing ideas from my classmates.

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