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Detention Center Blog 3

Today is the last day to go to the Detention Center. Inside, there is no longer the excitement that I felt when I went there for the first time, but a calm heart and a slightly lingering, peaceful state of mind.

Let’s start with something I have noticed before but didn’t mention: the Detention Center in Richmond only has a uniform requirement for clothing – that is, gray clothing – but no requirement for shoes. The juvenile offenders we saw on our visits were all wearing a variety of designer shoes, and if you didn’t look at their clothes, they seemed no different than kids who go to school outside of Richmond.

Back to the topic. This time we discussed two topics: one was “What is your favorite food?” and the other was about favorite music and relate it to our own experiences. This time my group was a little less cooperative with me. When it came to the topic of music, because I hadn’t learned about the artists they were talking about, my group members just started talking with each others – it was obvious that they were very interested in the music, but they refused to answer the questions and share their own experiences in the form of a chat. They even joked to me about their favorite food being cockroaches when talking about food.

Interestingly, one of them also said today that he would love to visit China and I shared with him some of the famous Chinese food and Chinese table customs. They were interested in the low prices in China and I told them that making money in the US and spending it in China is the best way to save money.

Detention Blog 3

The third time I went to the Detention Center, there was still some excitement in my heart, but the nervousness had disappeared and I was more calm and comfortable. There were two new children today – even though the people changed, they still gave me a similar feeling. They were both people of color and both had distinct accents. One of them, like the guy I met last week, also loves to sing, and both of them love China and want to travel there.

The two people in my group today were almost the same as every time, one was more outgoing and the other more shy. The former one told me that although he loves music and writes his own music, he knows that it doesn’t make any money and can only be used as his side business. When I asked them what industry they wanted to get into, they didn’t have an exact goal, just have the idea of “making a lot of money” – they lacked a clear plan for the future.

I tried to motivate them during the process, pushing them to tell me more and to practice their storytelling skills. I noticed that they liked to use very short sentences to summarize a story that could have had a lot of details, and their storytelling lacked organization. So I contributed a lot of my own stories and my ideas for the future in the process.

It was interesting to note that both men were very interested in China and the Chinese language. They asked me a lot about my experiences of going to school in China, and in particular they asked me if I could write Chinese and if I could understand the meaning of each character. They were almost simultaneously surprised when I answered in the affirmative, as perhaps Chinese was something difficult and unfamiliar to them.

Overall, my experience today has given me a greater awareness and deeper understanding of a segment of American society.

Detention Center Blog 2

Today was the second day of going to the Detention Center and I got to meet a different group of people. Today we talked about everyone’s dreams for the future and superpowers – if you had a superpower how would you use it.

While talking about dreams, one of the guys in my group introduced me to the fact that he wants to be an entrepreneur because he’s currently working on a clothing business – he has over eight thousand followers on TikTok, and his main job is to print designs on clothes and then buy them off. The other guy – the two of them are very close friends – has seemingly very different perspectives. This boy wished to live on a mountain for the rest of his life. He enjoys the peace and quiet of living with no one to bother him. This boy likes to produce music, he knows how to use different software to create music, and his friends around him have taught him how to produce music, so he can write his own songs without any professional training; the songs he wrote himself have more than 20,000 plays on YouTube – which for him is a remarkable achievement for him. This guy also really wanted to go to the Great Wall and was interested in Chinese culture because his ancestors were Chinese.

We then talked about the superpowers that each of us would like to pick. The first boy said that he wanted the ability to turn stones into gold so that he wouldn’t have to work – he wanted to be the richest man in the world. The second boy, on the other hand, didn’t want to be very rich; he just wants to be wealthy enough to give him and his family a good life, he thought a lot of money would invite trouble. The superpower he wishes to acquire is the ability to read minds so he can understand a person’s emotional swings and their inner thoughts. I really appreciated this boy’s values: his love of music, his emotional subtlety and his lack of greed were very appealing. The first boy was more introverted in comparison, and when it came to his dreams, he wasn’t very firm in his conviction to be an entrepreneur – he ended up saying that his real dream was to be the Terminator in the movie, but didn’t give a reason.

Detention Center Blog

Today was my first time to go to a detention center, and I felt a strong sense of freshness in my heart. When I arrived at the detention center, the place where the juvenile offenders were held was more cozy than I had imagined – the colorful walls, the basketball gymnasium and the white walls covered with graffiti were full of the humanistic atmosphere that is rare in a detention center.

I was apprehensive about meeting this group of juveniles, as I had no previous experience with them.  After introducing themselves, I asked them what their respective dreams were – some said something like being an engineer, some said they wanted to take over his dad’s business after getting their Business Diploma, and others wanted to go into music. It was clear that they were a group of teenagers with dreams and souls – but who had made a “dumb decision” that they would regret for the rest of their lives. But they all have aspirations for a new life, and they all mention that they don’t want to go back to detention center – possibly because of the grumpy buffs and the militaristic nature of the place.

After listening to my story, J told me his story – he got here because he was in a racing competition when he got into trouble with someone and hurt them on purpose. He is fluent in English and Spanish – because he is Hispanic, and the other juvenile offender we interacted with is also Hispanic, but he doesn’t speak English. I tried to talk to him, telling him that it was a blessing in disguise and encouraging him to look toward the future – he held my hand as he said goodbye, as if he had found a soul mate – something no one talks to them about at the detention center.

Prep Note 10.31

Reading “Persepolis,” it’s clear how much the pictures add to the story. The drawings don’t just show what’s happening, they help explain the emotions and the bigger picture of what was going on in Iran. For example, when talking about the veil, the illustrations show the mixed feelings of the girls. The words tell the story, but the images give it depth, helping readers connect with the author’s experiences in a more meaningful way. The combination of text and art makes the book’s messages clearer and more impactful.

The black-and-white images and the tragic story behind them make the whole work full of tragic colors, and the visual impact of the images makes the suffering of the Iranian people in the Iran-Iraq war visually displayed in front of us.

Prep Note 10/10

Source:

Deyle, Steven. The Domestic Slave Trade in American Life. Oxford University Press, 2015. This source located on page 110, source number 239.

Author:

Steven Deyle, an associate professor of history at the University of Houston, is a renowned scholar in the field of American history, particularly focusing on the domestic slave trade.

Summary:

In his book, The Domestic Slave Trade in American Life, Steven Deyle delves into the intricate history of the domestic slave trade in the United States. It focuses on the spillover effects of low price volatility in the Richmond slave market and its profound impact on the burgeoning cotton industry in the region. Deyle provides an in-depth analysis of how the prosperity of the cotton industry was intricately connected to the dynamics of the slave trade during this period.

The book has 389 pages comprises 15 comprehensive chapters that meticulously illustrate the historical context and far-reaching consequences of the domestic slave trade in America. The credibility of this source is bolstered by its publication under Oxford University Press, a globally recognized and reputable academic publisher known for its stringent peer-review process that ensures the accuracy and reliability of its publications.

 

Prep Note 10/5 – Discussion Reflection

After my discussion with Professor Dolson yesterday, I have gained a clearer understanding of the proper approach to character analysis. It involves formulating a thesis to unify the analysis and utilizing evidence from the article to support these insights. In the past, I mistakenly perceived literary analysis as a process of simply presenting events in chronological order to demonstrate my understanding of the entire article. However, I now recognize that establishing a central idea and weaving the analysis around this idea with evidence as the foundation is a far more effective approach to character analysis.

Yesterday, I chose to focus on analyzing Dean as a character, specifically exploring how Dean establishes his sense of “self-worth.” This examination involves delving into Dean’s elusive and undefined “big dream,” as well as the paradoxical nature of his life and his challenging family background, marked by a lack of love. Through this lens, it becomes evident that Dean’s ultimate desire is to find a sense of belonging and recognition among the people in his life. He employs the concept of the “Big Dream” as a means of self-sabotage, as he seeks to uncover his true identity within the context of his family.

Daily Class Notes 9/28 – Wesley

Review – Tuesday

2 minutes free write. What do you remember about Professor Julie McConnel’s visit.

Some juvenile offenders never leave Richmond, as college students, we can’t imagine live in one place forever, and have no outside experiences. Living in one place making them have no idea of the outside world – this may lead to some extreme behaviors.

Then professor Dolson points out that traveling can open new possibilities, and significant changes can occur when young individuals are exposed to novel experiences.

One student perceives that from this conversation, we need to recognize our own privilege deeply in our heart – our social circle making us unaware of their experience.

One student mentioned micro elements and macro elements. Being in different places and being exposed to different people can greatly influence the formation of their personalities and values.

The idea was exposed: for some people, books and TV video games are the only way to see the outer world. It is difficult for people to make sense of what the real world like in these ways above.

The lack of privilege among young people, which hinders their access to higher education and other resources typically available to individuals, is not a problem of their own making.

Professor Dolson concluded that the system is continually evolving, driven by our collective efforts to bring about positive change. Individuals, in turn, construct narratives about what the world is like and explore the possibilities. With each new experience, whether gained through reading books or interacting with people from diverse backgrounds, we gain a deeper understanding of the world. She also said, while modern technology allows us to connect with others online and hear their stories, physically visiting new cities, mountains, and unfamiliar places is more powerful.

Our imagination can be a powerful tool for crafting new narratives. It encourages us to ponder the realm of possibilities and enables us to create fresh stories based on our unique experiences.

Then we wrote a card for the law professor to express our appreciation of sharing her experience to us.

We discussed a concerning issue: lawyers who defend young people are not well-supported by the state. They’re paid only $120 per case, and it seems that the government doesn’t provide much help for these kids. While we recognize that everyone has a right to legal representation, it’s troubling that those without money often can’t get a proper lawyer.

Then we discussed about the Book – Richmond’s Unhealed History.

During our class discussion, we had the opportunity to review each other’s preparation notes. One significant point that emerged was the experience shared by Anna. She recounted that whenever the topic of Native Americans was raised at her high school, the Wi-Fi mysteriously got blocked, and numerous teachers were even fired for discussing Native American history. This particular experience generated a lively discussion, with everyone in the class sharing their own experiences and perspectives on the matter.

We also discussed the varying approaches to teaching Native American history in different regions. For instance, in Texas, the curriculum explicitly covers Native American history. Some students even have dedicated classes taught by teachers with firsthand experience living on reservations. These classes provide insights into how Native Americans live within broader society.

In contrast, there are cases where Native American history is scarcely mentioned or entirely omitted from school curricula. One student noted that in her school, Native American history was a substantial and important part of her history class, akin to an Advanced Placement (AP) history class. It was surprising to learn that in other people’s schools, the history of Native Americans was not taught at all.

Professor Dolson encouraged us to consider how much trust we place in the stories presented in this book. The book is essentially a collection of personal narratives, arranged in a storytelling fashion along a historical timeline.

To support these stories, the author uses various techniques, such as including quotes and primary sources. The inclusion of endnotes suggests that the author conducted thorough research, which follows the traditional approach to learning and thinking. Essentially, the author combines existing knowledge to create fresh insights and understanding.

The book commences with a narrative that back to the era when foreign nations first set foot on this land. Its introduction is crafted around a symbol, an associated date, and a vivid portrayal of the landscape. In tandem with this, the professor added their insights regarding the visual aspects.

A particularly intriguing facet explored is the reaction of Tsenacomoco’s residents upon encountering an unfamiliar symbol, which led them to ponder the physical appearance of these newly arrived individuals. This perspective underscores the differing viewpoints between those who approached the island and those already residing along the shoreline.

The author gathers insights from different sources and uses them to form conclusions, all while expressing his unique identity as an American. For instance, when discussing the English arrival, historical accounts might say they came to cooperate, but the author, speaking as a scholar, uses his own words to argue that they were not being truthful.

Professor Dolson stressed the importance of being mindful of the author’s intentions while reading. We can decide whether to agree with those intentions or not, but it’s crucial to be aware of them. We can stick to some details to understand the intentions of characters.

This brings us to the realm of emotions. Professor Dolson mentioned, “Sometimes my feelings are triggered, evoking memories and connecting different aspects within us. The stronger the emotion, the more resonant and noticeable it becomes.”

A student agreed, “We can imagine what is happening – because it is so detailed.”

Next Week: Accept Commitment again, and evaluate which one you are doing well, which one you will improve.

2 Min Free Write

Juveniles crime should not be punctuated seriously, the society should give them more opportunities to let them develop their immature mind and values.

Juveniles’ lawyers do not get paid a lot, is normally about 150 dollars per person and they have to do the exactly same amount of work as any other cases.

Prep Note 9/28

The Richmond’s Unhealed History reveals the harsh realities of European occupation and rule in Virginia. Unlike other historical accounts, this book offers a unique perspective by presenting the story through the lens of the English government’s motivations and religious beliefs, providing readers with a comprehensive understanding of the historical processes involved.

The British government viewed colonization as a solution to England’s high unemployment rates, using it as a means to stabilize society and consolidate the monarchy’s rule. They believed that colonization would significantly contribute to the spread of the Christian faith, illustrating the profound influence of religion on the expansion of European powers in the Americas.

One striking aspect of the book is its portrayal of the unjust treatment of Native Americans. It emphasizes that “their rights to complete sovereignty, as independent nations, were necessarily diminished, and their power to dispose of the soil at their own will, to whomever they pleased, was denied by the original fundamental principle.” These words poignantly convey the deprivation of Native American rights and the immense suffering they endured during this period.

The Richmond’s Unhealed History offers a compelling narrative that uncovers the motivations and consequences of European colonization. By exploring the English government’s perspective and the religious influences at play, readers gain a more holistic view of the historical processes involved. Furthermore, the book’s depiction of unjust laws vividly illustrates the hardships faced by Native Americans during this tumultuous era in history. It serves as an important reminder of the complexities and injustices of European colonization in Virginia, shedding light on an unhealed history that continues to shape the region’s present and future.

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