The essay workshop for really helpful overall. I find it significant to hear from others their perspectives on my creation because it is challenging to identify any flaws by myself since I am biased. Sometimes, it is not even about the flaws, there are just different opinions since writing can have so many different forms and different ways to be interpreted.  The feedback that I received helped me gain different perspectives and see my essay more holistically, Now, I feel much more comfortable with my version of my essay.