Stage I

Stage One Draft FYS 9.20

Stage One FYS 9.20 –

This is just the first page of what I brought to you. The abundance of blue marks depicts how horribly this draft originally was.  The most helpful part of this was when you told me to define a dystopia.  After I did that for my final, I found myself referring back to the definition countless times in both Stages II and III.

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