{"id":220,"date":"2015-10-18T19:28:33","date_gmt":"2015-10-18T19:28:33","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blog.richmond.edu\/utopias15\/?p=26"},"modified":"2015-10-18T19:28:33","modified_gmt":"2015-10-18T19:28:33","slug":"response-paper-4","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.richmond.edu\/fysutopiasfall2015\/2015\/10\/18\/response-paper-4\/","title":{"rendered":"Response Paper 4"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In his article about Thomas Moore\u2019s Utopia, Brendan Bradshaw argues that Utopia was not created as they only solution for the problems recounted in book I, however, he offers the best possible solution for those problems, essentially something for society to strive toward.\u00a0 In addition, he refutes Hexler\u2019s claim that Utopia is supposed to represent a Christian commonwealth, therefore, challenging the relationship between morality and religion in Christianity.<\/p>\n<p>In the beginning of the article Bradshaw explains the success and the failure of those who have attempted to find Moore\u2019s intentions in writing Utopia: what was successful and what he disagrees with.\u00a0 The main argument he focuses on is Hexler\u2019s claim that Utopia is a Christian commonwealth.\u00a0 Bradshaw links Moore to Erasmus, a Christian humanist and colleague of Moore, who argues that even the most virtuous pagans still need the revelation of Christ.\u00a0 Hexler, however, sees the Utopians as true Christians despite never truly becoming Christian.\u00a0 Virtue and reason are enough for one to be a \u201ctrue Christian.\u201d \u00a0\u00a0He is right to argue that Utopia must be related to Christian humanists in the 16<sup>th<\/sup> century but not to condemn Christian practices as useless.\u00a0 He does, however, stress the importance morality plays alongside religion.\u00a0 Bradshaw writes, \u201cJust as morality is a precondition of spirituality in practice of religion, so it is a precondition of revelation in the understanding of it\u201d (Bradshaw).\u00a0 Therefore, morality and revelation are both necessary to become a true Christian.\u00a0 Without each other they become useless.\u00a0 Erasmus claims that one must have knowledge and prayer.\u00a0 Without knowledge and virtue prayer is useless.\u00a0 But without prayer one can not connect with God and is not truly Christian.\u00a0 The Utopians, who have achieved virtue and knowledge through reason, are able to understand and truly accept Christ.\u00a0 Ultimately, Moore did not intend to completely challenge the need for revelation, instead he viewed morality as a way to better accept and understand the teachings of God.<\/p>\n<p>Skinner and Falon, rightfully argue that utopia should be considered \u201cNo Place\u201d, however, they fail to recognize it as an ideal and instead see it as an idyll.\u00a0 An idyll would refer to the commonwealth of utopia a happy, perfect place that can only be imagined and not brought to life.\u00a0 Bradshaw, however, argues that it is an ideal solution to the problems society faced.\u00a0 He asserts on the purpose of book II, \u201cBook II, therefore, did not represent \u2018the only possible solution\u2026 for the evils depicted in book I\u2019. It represented the best possible solution for them. (Bradshaw 20).\u00a0 Essentially, he argues that Book II is the intended as the best possible solution to rid the problems discussed in book I and although Moore knows Utopia could not exist, society can use its ideas and institutions to better themselves.\u00a0 He uses evidence from the societies described in the first book such as the Macerians: who placed a limit on the about of coin the king may have in his possession so the king will not be greedy.\u00a0 Raphael notes that this society is not perfect like Utopia, but it is close.\u00a0 This reform is something that could have been done in Europe at the time and may have improved its social conditions.\u00a0 Therefore, by striving to be like Utopia, society can find ways to improve its social structure.\u00a0 The final argument stems from the relationship between Moore\u2019s character, the political side, and Hytholoday, the moral side.\u00a0 In conclusion to his work, Bradshaw claims on the relationship between moral and practical thought.\u00a0 Both ways of thinking are important to society.\u00a0 He is arguing that the two sides, represented by Moore and Hytholoday, must work together to make improvements.\u00a0 Both arguments are valid and society must be able to use logic and morals cohesively to adapt and change for the betterment of the society, just like the Utopians.<\/p>\n<p>I have neither received nor given unauthorized assistance in the completion of this work.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Bibliography<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>Bradshaw, Brendan. &#8220;More on Utopia*.&#8221; <em> J. The Historical Journal<\/em> 24, no. 01 (1981): 1-27. 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